Issues of debt are taking over college student’s lives. The average college student is paying 24 percent interests on credit cards this is accelerating through loans and credit card companies.
Megan, you have a good start here on finding your lede and the angle for the story. I like that you used a specific fact. Here are a few questions to help you revise:
1) What's the main focus of your story? What's the news? 2) How many sentences should a direct summary lede be? How many words?
I know, it's hard cutting it down! Focus that angle very narrowly, and writing short gets easier.
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Megan, you have a good start here on finding your lede and the angle for the story. I like that you used a specific fact. Here are a few questions to help you revise:
1) What's the main focus of your story? What's the news?
2) How many sentences should a direct summary lede be? How many words?
I know, it's hard cutting it down! Focus that angle very narrowly, and writing short gets easier.
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